March turned out to be a lucky month for me, and I found a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow. The National Federation of Press Women (NFPW) informed me I’d won three awards in their 2026 At-Large Professional Contest in three different categories. I wasn’t sure why this affected me so much, so I worked through it in writing and hope some of the thoughts might help other writers.
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Reaction
Holy cow—nice words—thank you!
Why it Matters
One of my writing mentors once said, “When passion fuels writing, it shows.”
I was fiercely passionate about the “Connecting the Dots” story. I wrote about the military assignment where I believed I made the most significant impacts of my career. I appreciate being able to share this honor with my former Joint Intelligence Task Force – Combating Terrorism (JITF-CT) teammates. The story appeared in the Military Writers Society of America’s Reflections: Service to our Country anthology.
Lessons Learned
If you care, it shows
Write from your heart
Gather good quotes from trusted sources
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Reaction
I dedicated this issue ofDispatchesmagazine to Vietnam veterans, their families, and those who support them at the fiftieth year commemoration of the war. The judge’s comments helped me think I’m on the right track.
Why it Matters
I took over editing this magazine as a volunteer effort after the three previous editors quit. I had no “pass down” (as we called it in the Navy) and lived through a big learning curve. I made changes I thought would help and have had the pleasure of helping veterans and military families tell their stories—many published for the first time.
Although a volunteer effort, my heart sings when members appreciate having their stories or poems published
Rely on wonderful magazine and book designers like the most-patient Andrea Reider of Reider Books and who has made my job easier and the outcome award-winning
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Reaction
I entered the “Song Lyrics – Risky Business” article into the competition at the last minute for some reason. My first version was—well, boring. I decided to add a little humor, which made it more fun and a better read.
Why it Matters
I wrote this short article after being part of writers groups and seeing and hearing people using song lyrics in their stories and books, unaware of the copyright issues involved.
Lessons Learned
Even if it hadn’t won an award, it was information I thought fellow writers should be aware of
If a story isn’t working, look for another way to approach it that may work
Have fun with writing and presenting stories
I hope something here may be useful for other writers and editors and thank the awards judges for their valuable time and feedback.
Words are the basis for communication, no matter the language spoken. Babies make sounds, which eventually are formed into words. Here at NAIWE, we know the importance of words, and we want to celebrate it with YOU!
We may only celebrate it for a week, but we believe in the importance of words all year long!”
NAIWE hosts daily writing challenges for members, and more information is available at www.WordsMatterWeek.com.
Words do NOT matter if we never put them to paper or the keyboard. So, my challenge to yuself for Words Matter Week is to write at least 30 minutes per day. We’ll see what kind of “matter” shows up at the end of the week.
The new year is a good time to reflect on the last, and I prefer to look at the positive. I read and listened to more books than ever, which means I’m achieving one of my goals! Since my current work in progress is a historical fiction novel, I consider reading part of my homework.
I curated ten of my recent favorites across a variety of genres but with similarities: strong characters fighting to support their countries and their beliefs.
Historical Fiction
Fall of Giants (The Century Trilogy #1) by Ken Follett
Reading this led to books #2 and #3 in this series…a fascinating education told in riveting tales
Sisters of Night and Fog by Erika Robuck
Strong women fighting evil and seeking survival against all odds
The Rose Code by Kate Quinn
Three brilliant women from wildly different backgrounds solving the problems others couldn’t
Degrees of Intelligence: A Geopolitical Thriller of WWII and the Cold War—Inspired by a True Story by Miranda Armstadt
Politics, spies, and a behind-the-scenes look at the early days of the CIA
The Sand Pounder: Love and Drama on Horseback in WWII by M.J. Evans
What’s not to love about a young woman challenging the rules to serve her country?
(Young adult historical fiction)
History
Undaunted Courage: Meriwether Lewis, Thomas Jefferson, and the Opening of the American West by Stephen E. Ambrose
An eye-opening story of adventure, history and courage every American should read (or listen to)
Operation Underworld: How the Mafia and U.S. Government Teamed Up to Win World War II by Matthew Black
A true story that seems unbelievable—Naval Intelligence and the Mafia joining forces to help win WWII
Mystery
Welcome Home to Murder by Rosalie Spielman
Female veteran returning home to find her family in danger in this cozy mystery
Fatal Image: An Avery Sloane Mystery by Rhonda Lane
An intriguing mystery including horses, veterans, and a slice of humor
Fiction
Playing Army by Nancy Stroer
Will she race to the finish line or crash along the way?
I hope you’ve enjoyed the list, and please feel free to add your own favorites in the comments.
George Ormond, 1917, a proud member of “New York’s Division”
George Ormond’s pale blue eyes watered until the day he died. But he never complained about the Great War. Word was that mustard gas got him, but in those days, people didn’t talk much about injuries, follow-on treatment, or post-traumatic stress. My grandfather died when I was 21, about the same age he was when returning from the war. I wish I’d had adult conversations with him about his experiences, but it’s obviously too late. He likely didn’t realize how interested people might be in a blue-collar kid from Brooklyn’s renditions of his encounters on the front lines.
One of my earliest memories of my grandfather taught me a valuable lesson. I was five-years-old, in my front yard, and he watched me kill a bug.
“Why did you do that?” he asked.
“Because it was going to bite me,” I answered.
“But it wasn’t bothering you.”
And I realized he was right. I felt so ashamed, but I learned from his short training session. This war hardened man taught me in a few sentences to be sensitive to each life.
Private Ormond spent his last teenage years in the U.S. Army’s 27th Division – New York’s Division. From 1917 through 1919, he trained in the United States, deployed to the Western Front, and returned to his city’s heroic homecoming for the troops. As a child, I understood my grandfather had been in World War I. But as a child, I didn’t realize the old man in front of me wasn’t much older than I was he he experienced the stories of places so far away about a time seeming to be so long ago.
I remember hearing about trenches, and how his unit even had gas masks for the horses. My grandfather didn’t try to scare me, but I think he wanted to share a part of the family history not recorded elsewhere. But I didn’t understand the importance of listening to those stories at the time.
George Ormond donning his gas mask for a photo opportunity
My grandfather was a bit of a conundrum. At one moment, he’d be my jovial “Pop Pop,” smiling, arms outstretched, waiting for a hug, and in the next, a grumpy old man seemingly annoyed by my childish noise. He loved my grandmother, who was the yin to his yang. As somber and unhappy as he seemed most the time, she swung to the opposite side of the pendulum. She joked, played games with my brother and I, and let us turn the couches upside down to build indoor forts. Even as kids, we wondered how these two very different people ended up together.
The two of them raised two sons, the first members in either family to attend and graduate from college. My father served as a U.S. Navy surface warfare officer, and my uncle a navy pilot.
My dad used to say, “My father was born before the Wright brothers flew the first plane, and in his lifetime, he got to see his own son fly off aircraft carriers.”
My grandparents celebrated their fiftieth wedding anniversary with both sons and their families, including their six grandchildren. I’m not sure I’d ever seen my grandfather happier. Just three years later, my fun-loving grandmother passed away. Pop Pop deteriorated quickly and was laid to rest by her side seven months later. Sadly, he never got to see two of his grandchildren carry on the military family tradition. My cousin Mark had a career as a navy diver, and I, as a naval intelligence officer. I had the honor of being the first female Ormond to wear the uniform.
Following my Navy retirement, I finally researched my grandfather’s war history. The 27th Division to which he belonged included a brave band of New Yorkers who fought in fierce battles including the Somme Offensive. President Woodrow Wilson federalized this New York National Guard unit in July 1917, and Major General John F. O’Ryan commanded “O’Ryan’s Roughnecks” throughout the war. His men loved him, and his enlisted men voted on the unit patch, which included stars of the constellation Orion’s Belt, in honor of their leader.
I remember my grandfather pointing out Orion’s Belt in the night sky, and it became the first constellation I could identify. Pop Pop never shared the connection with his commander and the stars, but it was our one and only astronomy lesson in our 21 years together. That time and those stars now hold an even more special meaning to me.
Assigned to F Battery, 104th Field Artillery, Private Ormond saw action in the infamous “no man’s land,” Verdun, the St. Mihiel Offensive, and the Meuse-Argonne Offensive. According to O’Ryan, “The Verdun sector had been the scene of very severe fighting and the word ‘La Meuse’ connoted to the French soldier the most desperate fighting, the most terrible suffering, and the most hotly contested area of the war.”
The Rockaway Medal of Honor – one of the few artifacts from George Ormond’s World War I service
“The Meuse-Argonne Offensive is considered an epic battle which essentially ended World War I,” wrote Pamela A. Bakker, author of The 104th Field Artillery Regiment of the New York National Guard, 1916 – 1919, From the Mexican Border to the Meuse-Argonne. Bakker stated it was the bloodiest battle in which the U.S. engaged, resulting in 95,786 wounded and 26,277 dead.
“The citations pertaining to the 104th Field Artillery Regiment, as well as those for the entire 52nd Field Artillery Brigade, almost always have the repeated phrase ‘while under heavy enemy shell fire,’ with many adding ‘under machine gun fire, and gas concentrations,’” Bakker continued.
Private Ormond’s unit was also attached to the most gassed division among the Americans, which may explain the eyes that teared for the following sixty years. He never mentioned the hunger, the sleeplessness, the lice, the filth, the mud, the cold, or the dysentery common among the men. He also never mentioned the unending fighting, the injuries, or the deaths, which surely he had not forgotten. Instead, he spoke of pride of having served.
George Ormond instilled in his family a sense of service to country. His two children served, and two of his grandchildren served. My grandfather taught me lessons while he was alive, starting with respect for each life. Learning more about his history, I learned new lessons about his humility regarding his own wartime service. Although I will never see what the mysterious war hero’s injured eyes saw, I learned a great deal from him. I appreciate who he was, what he did, and the courage he displayed both on the battlefield and throughout his life.
Originally published in “All Gave Some,” Military Writers Society of America 2014 Anthology (Red Engine Press)